I've written more than 180 science books for children, but last week, for the very first time, one of them was announced in Publisher's Weekly. Imagine my surprise when I saw it!
I'm delighted that Pipsqueaks, Slowpokes, and Stinkers: Celebrating Animal Underdogs will be illustrated by Stephanie Laberis and published by Peachtree Publishers in Fall 2018.
I know, I know, 2018 seems sooooo far away, but making a picture book takes time. I promise it will be worth the wait.
Here are a few art samples from Stephanie's terrific portfolio:
Don't you just love how she portrays animals? They're scientifically accurate and a whole lotta fun at the same time. This style is perfect for the book's lively, humorous voice.
Even though the information is presented in a fun way, the book's central nugget, it's creative core is serious. I was severely bullied as a child, and this book is my way of offering hope to children who might be facing something similar right now.
Everyday across America, children get picked on for being small or slow or shy or overweight or clumsy, but sometimes these perceived weaknesses turn out to be a core part of what makes them successful adults. Using examples from the animal world, I encourage children to flip their thinking, and to be kind to one another.
Friday, September 30, 2016
Wednesday, September 28, 2016
Behind the Books: Fiction or Nonfiction?, Part 1
In the United States, the
decision of whether a children’s book is fiction or nonfiction ultimately lies
with the Library of Congress.
Prior to publication, publishers send books to the Library of Congress. A LOC employee reads it, writes a brief summary of the book, classifies it as either “juvenile fiction” or “juvenile literature” (which includes nonfiction and usually--but not always--poetry) and assigns a call number that librarians will eventually use to shelve it.
And look what happened to these four books written by the same author in the same style:
Prior to publication, publishers send books to the Library of Congress. A LOC employee reads it, writes a brief summary of the book, classifies it as either “juvenile fiction” or “juvenile literature” (which includes nonfiction and usually--but not always--poetry) and assigns a call number that librarians will eventually use to shelve it.
This sounds like a good
system, but guess what? The Library of Congress isn’t always consistent. Look
what happened two these two companion titles:
And look what happened to these four books written by the same author in the same style:
How would you classify these
books?
Cases like these help
explain why there's so much confusion in determining whether a book is fiction
or nonfiction. But there’s yet another reason that the term “informational
text” is sometimes misused to describe a book that presents true information
but takes a few liberties. I call it the Biography Conundrum, and I’ll talk
more about it next week.
Monday, September 26, 2016
Quintets for Curious Kids: 5 Great Nonfiction Picture Books for Kids Who Love to Tinker and Solve Problems
For most of this
year, my Monday blog strand will feature some of my favorite books for kids who
love to tinker and probe, imagine and invent, wonder and observe, explore and
discover our wonderful world and everything in it.
So let’s get started!
The Boy Who Harnessed the Wind by William Kamkwamba and Bryan Mealer
The Day-Glo Brothers: The True Story of Bob and Joe Switzer’s Bright Ideas and Brand-New Colors by Chris Barton
Mr. Ferris and his Wheel by Kathryn Gibbs Davis
Timeless Thomas: How Thomas Edison Change Our Lives by Gene Baretta
Winter's Tail: How One Little Dolphin Learned to Swim Again by Juliana Hatkoff, Isabella Hatkoff, and Craig Hatkoff
So let’s get started!
The Boy Who Harnessed the Wind by William Kamkwamba and Bryan Mealer
The Day-Glo Brothers: The True Story of Bob and Joe Switzer’s Bright Ideas and Brand-New Colors by Chris Barton
Mr. Ferris and his Wheel by Kathryn Gibbs Davis
Timeless Thomas: How Thomas Edison Change Our Lives by Gene Baretta
Winter's Tail: How One Little Dolphin Learned to Swim Again by Juliana Hatkoff, Isabella Hatkoff, and Craig Hatkoff
Saturday, September 24, 2016
NF 4 NF Handout: Four Steps to a Stronger Manuscript
Vibrant
Verbs: Books to
Study
Comparisons: Books to Study
Dolphins by Melissa Stewart
If You Hopped Like a Frog by David Schwartz
Actual Size by Steve Jenkins
Language Devices: Books to Study
Baboons by Melissa
Stewart
Rain,
Rain, Rain Forest by Brenda Z. Guiberson
Porcupines by Judith Jango-Cohen
Sensory
Details: Books to
Study
Army Ant Parade by April Pulley Sayre
Gorillas in the Mist by Dian Fossey
Up Your Nose! The Secrets of Schnozes and
Snouts by Melissa Stewart
Comparisons: Books to Study
Dolphins by Melissa Stewart
If You Hopped Like a Frog by David Schwartz
Actual Size by Steve Jenkins
Language Devices: Books to Study
When Rain Falls by Melissa Stewart
The Story Goes On by Aileen Fischer
Vulture View by April Pulley Sayre
Friday, September 23, 2016
NF for NF Handout: Got Motivation?
You’ve probably heard that the secret to completing a manuscript is as easy as BIC—Butt in Chair. But with such busy lives, it can be hard to find the time and, more importantly, the motivation to stick to the writing goals we set for ourselves. How can we make writing a top priority day after day, week after week, month after month—until our manuscript is finally done?
Know the Why: If you aren’t clear on why you’re doing something, it’s easy to give up. Take the time to figure out why you’re doing what you’re doing and how it benefits you, your family, and your community.
Think of your goals as an action plan.
Once you have a plan, stay the course. Every time someone asks you to do something or you have an opportunity, ask yourself: Does this serve one of my goals? Does this serve my BIG dream?
Here are some tips and tools to stay motivated as you pursue a writing life.
Don’t think about achieving success or being successful. Don’t compare yourself to others who you think are more successful. That kind of thinking is toxic. No one ever thinks they are successful.
Don’t think about achieving success or being successful. Don’t compare yourself to others who you think are more successful. That kind of thinking is toxic. No one ever thinks they are successful.
It’s better to focus on motivation. Because:
1. We can control it.
2. It helps us remember that we’re on a journey.
3. It lets us know when something is wrong.
Know the Why: If you aren’t clear on why you’re doing something, it’s easy to give up. Take the time to figure out why you’re doing what you’re doing and how it benefits you, your family, and your community.
Motivation has three main components:
1. Focusing on your BIG dream.
2. Setting goals.
3. Staying positive.
Here's each step in greater detail:
Here's each step in greater detail:
1. What is your BIG dream is? Write it down. Create a vision of what you want your life to be. A vision board can help. Lots of people swear by them.
I use an idea board instead of a vision board. It works better for me. It’s a place to store and keep track of ideas for future books and marketing plans. Looking at what’s up there helps me set priorities quickly.
Want to know more about my idea board? Watch this video of my nieces giving a tour of my office.
Be sure to rehearse your BIG dream. Daydream as you drift off to sleep, while in the shower, while walking the dog, etc.
2. Set 4-5 goals per year. They should be specific, achievable, and measurable. Write them down in the following format: By ____ (date), I will ______.
2. Set 4-5 goals per year. They should be specific, achievable, and measurable. Write them down in the following format: By ____ (date), I will ______.
If you only have one or two goals, it may help to break them
into smaller steps.
If you have so many goals that you feel paralyzed, you have
created a to-do list, not goals. Think bigger picture and try again.
If addressing writer’s block is one of your goals, try switching
to a different writing project when you feel stuck. Getting stuck is a natural
part of the process, but you can stay productive if you devote your time and
energy to a different project.
If you’re wondering how to prioritize your goals, listen to your
heart. Which goal are you most passionate about?
I
post my goals in the upper right-hand corner of my idea board and look at them
every day. You can see my goals in the photo above. I usually write them on the
back of a receipt. No reason to waste paper.
Think of your goals as an action plan.
Once you have a plan, stay the course. Every time someone asks you to do something or you have an opportunity, ask yourself: Does this serve one of my goals? Does this serve my BIG dream?
Find a friend to help you stay accountable. A buddy can:
—Help you set deadlines
—Act as a sounding board
—Highlight your blind spots
—Be a cheerleader
—Celebrate successes (big and small)
3. To stay positive:
—Surround yourself with upbeat, constructive people.
Go forth and contribute. You can make it happen.
Wednesday, September 21, 2016
Behind the Books: What an Informational Book ISN’T
In
last week’s post, I outlined the origin and meanings of the three contradictory
definitions for “informational book” that are currently is use. There is also
a fourth use floating around out there, but it is without foundation.
Let’s face it. Writing engaging nonfiction isn’t easy. Because you can’t make anything up, you have to rely on the information that’s available, and sometimes the information a writer would like to include simply doesn’t exist.
Let’s face it. Writing engaging nonfiction isn’t easy. Because you can’t make anything up, you have to rely on the information that’s available, and sometimes the information a writer would like to include simply doesn’t exist.
It
can be tempting to invent dialog or rearrange chronology a bit to improve a
story arc. So tempting that some writers would love a term that justifies doing
so. That’s why it’s no surprise that some people misuse the term “informational
book,” thinking it is a kind of nonfiction that is based on true information
but takes occasional liberties with the verifiable facts.
But
this is NOT a legitimate use of the term “informational book”. NONE of the
three accepted definitions make room for made-up material with the goal of
strengthening a story. NONE.
If
you make up anything, anything at all, you are writing fiction. Period.
So
why does this mis-definition persist? There are a couple of reasons. I’ll discuss
the first of them next week.
Monday, September 19, 2016
TCRWP Handout: The Power of Voice in Nonfiction Writing
Nonfiction voice options
span a continuum, from lively to lyrical. Your topic and the approach you take
to it will dictate the best voice choice for a particular manuscript.
Coyote Moon by Maria Gianferari
What's the difference between voice and tone? Check out this blog post.
Some Characteristics of a Lively Nonfiction
Voice
- Second person point of view
- Figurative language, including alliteration/assonance, similes and
metaphors, onomatopoeia
- Sensory details
- Strong, surprising verbs
- Irresistible facts
Some Characteristics of a Lyrical Nonfiction
Voice
- Figurative language, including alliteration/assonance, opposition,
similes and metaphors
- Repetition
- Internal rhyme
- Strong, surprising verbs
Works well for
expository surveys and some picture-book biographies
Animal Grossapedia by
Melissa Stewart
Army Ant Parade by April Pulley Sayre
A Black Hole Is Not a Hole
by
Carolyn Cinami DeCristofano
Bone by Bone: Comparing Animal Skeletons by Sarah Levine
Bugged: How Insects Changed
the World by Sarah Albee
Deadliest Animals by Melissa Stewart
It’s
Spit-acular by
Melissa Stewart
Look
Up! Bird-Watching in Your Own Backyard by Annette LeBlanc Cate
Now Hear This by Melissa Stewart
Pink Is for Blobfish by Jess Keating
See How They Run by Susan E. Goodman
What to Do About Alice? by Barbara Kerley
What to Expect When You’re Expecting Larvae:
A Guide for Insect Parents (and Curious Kids) by Bridget Heos
Thank You, Sarah by Laurie Halse Anderson
Great Books with a Lyrical Voice
Works well for
nature-themed picture books and some biographies
Ballet for Martha by Jan Greenberg and Sandra Jordan
Beneath the Sun by Melissa Stewart
Coyote Moon by Maria Gianferari
Dave
the Potter by Laban Carrick Hill
An Egg is Quiet by Dianna Aston Hutts
Feathers: Not Just for Flying by
Melissa Stewart
Frog Song by Brenda Z. Guiberson
Lightship by Brian Floca
Planting
the Trees of Kenya: The Story of Wangari Maathai by
Claire A. Nivola
The Secret World of Walter
Anderson by Hester Bass
Step Gently Out by Helen Frost
Under the Snow by Melissa Stewart
When Marian Sang by Pam Munoz Ryan
When Rain Falls by Melissa Stewart
Vulture View by April Pulley Sayre
Great
Books with a Neutral Voice
Eye to
Eye by
Steve Jenkins
Frogs by Nic Bishop
Move by Steve Jenkins
& Robin Page
My
First Day by
Steve Jenkins & Robin Page
Neo
Leo by
Gene Barretta
Now
& Ben
by Gene Barretta
Redwoods
by
Jason Chin
Timeless
Thomas
by Gene Baretta
Friday, September 16, 2016
Disturbing Dewey: It’s a Good Thing
If you’re a book nerd and you’ve been reading my recent Wednesday posts, you might think it’s interesting that when patrons were having trouble finding novels amongst all the other literature, early twentieth-century librarians pulled them (and short story collections) out of their “proper” Dewey Decimal order and created a separate fiction section.
Yet, when librarians later began using the term “informational books” to describe everything in the nonfiction section except folktales, poetry, drama, etc., they didn’t create separate sections for the outliers. Why not have separate sections for poetry or drama or folktales?
Yet, when librarians later began using the term “informational books” to describe everything in the nonfiction section except folktales, poetry, drama, etc., they didn’t create separate sections for the outliers. Why not have separate sections for poetry or drama or folktales?
Maybe
librarians thought that would be too complicated. Or maybe, by then, the Dewey
system was so established that librarians were reluctant to mess with
it.
Well,
they’re messing with it now. And the results are terrific.
In recent years, some children’s librarians have taken a close look at their nonfiction collections and done some rearranging to better serve the needs of their young, curious patrons.
For
example, Judi Paradis, the fantastic teacher-librarian at Plympton Elementary School
in Waltham, MA, has rearranged her collection so that students interested in
mummies, U.S. states, and outer space can find the full range of books on each
of these topics more easily.
Judi
noticed that most books about outer space have Dewey Decimal numbers between
520 and 525. But rockets are at 629. Since children interested in planets
might also want to know more about rockets, Judi now shelves books about
rockets at 520.
Most
books about mummies have Dewey Decimal numbers in the 360s, but Egyptian
mummies are in the 930s. Judi decided to shelve all the mummy books in the
930s and doesn't worry about the South American mummies getting upset.
I
think these are great changes and would encourage more children’s librarians to
take a close look at their collections and consider moving books to places
where curious young mind can find them most easily.
Wednesday, September 14, 2016
Behind the Books: What Does "Informational Book" Really Mean?
There
are three contradictory definitions floating around, and they are causing a lot
of confusion.
Since
1970 or so, the librarian community has used the term “informational
books” to describe everything in the nonfiction section except poetry, drama,
and folktales.
Beginning
in the 1980s and solidified in 2000 by a landmark paper by Nell Duke, the
literacy education community has used the term “informational books” to
describe a narrow subset of nonfiction books that present information about
science, history, and other content areas. According to this definition,
informational books do not include biography, how-to descriptions, or any
kind of narrative writing. This definition is roughly equivalent to the more
useful term “expository nonfiction.”
In
2010, the Common Core State Standards introduced a third definition that is
much broader. It includes all narrative and expository nonfiction books plus reference
books, directions, forms, maps, persuasive essays, etc.
In
my opinion, if a term doesn’t have a standard, universal definition, then it’s
useless. That’s why I avoid using “informational book.” I just use "nonfiction."
And yet, it seems like the
confusing term is here to stay, so it’s important to know all its possible
meanings.
Monday, September 12, 2016
A Sneak Peek
Wow, wow, wow! I’m so excited to share a sneak peek of the
upcoming book Can an Aardvark Bark?,
illustrated by the uber-talented Steve Jenkins (Beach Lane Books, Summer 2017).
It’s a fun, interactive look at all the amazing ways animals use sounds to
communicate.
Here’s the title page:
And here’s a sketch and final art for one of the pages:
I can hardly wait to hold a copy in my hands.
Friday, September 9, 2016
September Is National Wildlife Month
One way to celebrate is by observing an animal in a natural
area and then writing about it. Why not take your students outside in search of
ants or birds or earthworms in the schoolyard? If school policy prohibits this,
you could find a local webcam and watch wildlife via the internet.
“As the morning passes, clouds meander across the bright blue sky. The shape of each is mirrored on the calm surface of the water below. Suddenly, the sky darkens as the sun’s light is momentarily blocked out by the body of a huge, awkwardly beautiful bird flying overhead. The lanky bird glides gracefully above the lake, slowly flapping its massive wings and dragging its long, stick-like legs behind.
Students may choose to write a scientific description or a
poem or even a personal narrative. Here’s an excerpt from the beginning of my
first book, Life Without Light. It’s
based on an experience I had at a Collins Lake in Scotia, NY, when I was about
20 years old.
“As the morning passes, clouds meander across the bright blue sky. The shape of each is mirrored on the calm surface of the water below. Suddenly, the sky darkens as the sun’s light is momentarily blocked out by the body of a huge, awkwardly beautiful bird flying overhead. The lanky bird glides gracefully above the lake, slowly flapping its massive wings and dragging its long, stick-like legs behind.
“From high
above, the great blue heron surveys the lake for the perfect fishing spots. It
watches for fish surfacing in search of their morning meal of insects. The heron
is looking for a breakfast of its own.
“The great bird lands in a
small cove and silently wades through the shallow water. When it spots a
potential victim, the heron extends its folded neck and stabs the unsuspecting
fish with its long, spear-like bill. The bird devours its catch quickly.”
I'll never forget the dark, cool shadow that mighty bird cast
as it cruised over the lake. One of the reasons it’s burned into my memory is
because I recorded it on the spot in my nature journal.
Wednesday, September 7, 2016
Behind the Books: How Nonfiction Got Its Name
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Melvil Dewey |
“Nonfiction sounds so negative. Let’s come up with a new name.”
“We shouldn’t define something
by what it isn’t.”
“Instead of nonfiction, why don’t we use true books or real books or fact books?”
But despite protests like
these, the term nonfiction seems to
stay with us. Did you ever wonder where the term came from in the first place? I
did, so I did some research. Here’s what I discovered.
Our story begins in 1876.
That’s when Melvil Dewey invented a (mostly) ingenious book cataloging system.
Librarians were so impressed with the Dewey Decimal System that it quickly
spread through libraries across America and the rest of the world too.
By the early 1900s, a growing number of library patrons were complaining that it was hard to find a good novel. That’s because “fiction” (novels and short stories) were interspersed among all the other categories of “literature” (essays, letters, speeches, satire) in the 800s.
And
that’s not all. The books in the 800s were organized by original language of
publication. So novels by American writers were nowhere near novels by German
writers or Portugese writers.
So
sometime between 1905 and 1910, librarians started pulling novels and short story
collections out of the 800s. They created a separate "fiction"
section with books arranged alphabetically by the author’s last name.
Soon,
people began calling everything else left behind (still arranged according to
Dewey’s system) "nonfiction." And the word stuck.
Friday, September 2, 2016
Radical Revision!
If you’re a regular reader of this blog, you
know that I think taking a break between drafts is a critically important part
of my writing process. I’ve written about it here and here.
I discuss this important step every time I
present the school visit program Creating Nonfiction: Researching, Writing, and
Revising. I’ve given this talk many times over the years, updating it as I
develop a better understanding of how I work and how I can best explain the
process to young writers.
Recently, many teachers have told me they
really like the Let It Chill Out part of my presentation and that it has made
them re-think how they ask their students to revise. They’ve come up with lots
of great ideas—letting manuscripts chill out during lunch and recess or over
the weekend or even during a school break.
The best idea of all came from the
fourth-grade teaching team at Kennedy Elementary School in Billerica,
MA. As the teachers listened to me describe the 10-year process of revising No Monkeys, No Chocolate, they hatched a
plan for a whole-school project I love.
This year, the first graders will write a
piece of nonfiction. Next year, when the students are in second grade, teachers
will share the No Monkeys, No Chocolate
Revision Timeline on my website and ask the children to revise the piece they wrote in first
grade.
Good
idea, right? But it gets even better. Both drafts will be placed in a folder,
and the students will revise the piece again in third grade, fourth grade, and
fifth grade. Wow!
Imagine
how different the final piece will be from the original. It will allow children
to see tangible evidence of their growth as writers and give them a true sense
of how long it can take to write a book.
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