Readers like surprises, such as playful and unexpected word choices. Simply put, they make reading more fun.
Some examples of this include:
—Gross, icky, silly,or sassy words
—Big words, lo-o-o-o-o-ng words
Many books make use of these devices, but here are two of my favorites.
The main text of An Egg is Quiet by Dianna Hutts Aston includes a variety of poetic and provocative statements.
“An egg is clever.”
“An egg is artistic.”
“An egg is textured.”
“An egg is giving.”
Most children (and adults) have never thought of an egg in these ways before. It is only after reading the smaller, supporting text scattered across the pages that the full meaning of the main text becomes clear. This sort of mysteriousness makes the book more engaging.
Bubble Homes and Fish Farts by Fiona Bayrock includes a page with the following text:
Each night thousands of herrings release streams of bubbles from their back sides. That’s right: fish farts. Well, sort of. To be true flatulence—that’s the scientific word for “fart”—the gas should come from digesting food. Burt herring FaRTs (Fast Repetitive Ticks) come from air herring have gulped at the surface, not from the food the fish have eaten.
What reader wouldn’t be intrigued by that?
These kinds of examples make us remember a book, so I’m willing to bet you can think of some books with text that surprised and delighted you the first time you read them. Feel free to share examples in the comments.